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Try looking into other media to get a sense of realistic motion. I get that this is all sprite work, but your characters should take a full second to fall at a constant rate. Gravity is much stronger and acts more exponentially than that.
This is just one example.

hanzo1 responds:

Thanks Brandy Buizel for the comment. This was my first ever battle animation and i know the flaws in it. Ill take what you said to heart, and I like creative criticism. but this started as a sprite animation test and i don't have too many sprites of the other chars other then the water elemental, the first character and the second character. well thanks for the comment again and i wish you a good day :D

I'm not even sure why you bothered roto-scoping. The lines are constantly inaccurate and don't add much. But even then I guess you'd just be left with hard-to-hear audio and blown out, tinted, live-action film.
Not that good.

LukeOllyOxen responds:

Hm alright wise guy. @ the time I recorded this with my cannon 550d that's why audio mightn't b the best. Thanks 4 your opinion

I was surprised to really like this. Good humor and timing; the only place for improvement I see is in the puppet animation itself. Good job!

It's a really neat style. I love that everything is made up of lines, no fill, and the animation still manages to flow well.
Sometimes the title cards felt a little on the nose about what was going on or but even then there were a just a bit too frequent for my taste.

TraineeArtist responds:

I'm glad you like the style, and I'll try to work on pacing and story for future animations. Thanks!

The audio gets louder and softer without warning, some of it is hard to understand, but I should also point out this doesn't need to be rated M for mature. Nothing here seems like it would belong in the M category. I suggest checking out other content on the site to get a better idea of where your video belongs.

The story isn't great which stinks because that's the main focus here.
The visuals are... there. It's just the same stick figures with moving mouths.
It's definitely not blam worthy, but it isn't very good.

tonyfamous responds:

This is a style I am persuing for random animations that I want to pump out quickly. I don't know if you've personally tried to animate anything, but animating is actually a long and drawn out process that can take weeks, months or years and since I only do this for fun in my free time, sometimes I prefer to sacrifice quality for quantity.

This isn't very good at all, but I am concerned whether or not this was stolen because of the watermarking.

JacksonS7R responds:

Hello BrandyBuizel

The watermarking is because I had used the Swf to Mp4 converter Trail Version of that link...

Thanks for your comment.

It's actually a very well made fan animation. A lot of attention to voices, especially love Chad's

I make stuff; sometimes for money, but always for fun.

Brandon @BrandyBuizel

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