This isn't very good at all, but I am concerned whether or not this was stolen because of the watermarking.
This isn't very good at all, but I am concerned whether or not this was stolen because of the watermarking.
Hello BrandyBuizel
The watermarking is because I had used the Swf to Mp4 converter Trail Version of that link...
Thanks for your comment.
It's actually a very well made fan animation. A lot of attention to voices, especially love Chad's
Just a lot of the same walking animation with some objects being added after a while.
There isn't much to this work, but I can see what you were going for with what I assume is an analogy for RPG progression. It's a pretty interesting sudden revelation you get towards the end, but overall it is very plain.
Review Score of 2.5, but a rating of 3 from me.
I hope to see more stuff like this with hopefully a little more detail.
You obviously have a clear direction you want this series to take by the writing style and video effects, but I gotta say for this "prologue" you didn't do a good job setting the stage for anything. I have absolutely no idea what this is supposed to be about.
Also there's some conflicting dialogue that makes it more confusing:
"A demon entered the village"
...later...
"Did you say it was machines in the village?"
"Yeas, why?"
That doesn't make sense.
And also:
"Take the pups to an orphanage"
...
"Just do as I said"
...
"Just take the pups to the school"
There wasn't really a visible shift where the (what I assume is a protagonist) changed it's mind between these lines so I assume it might be a discontinuity?
So yea, in summary, looks like a lot of care was put into making an upcoming series, but from this prologue/teaser alone I have no idea what it's about(after watching several times to be sure).
It's a pretty unique idea, I really enjoyed it and some obvious effort was put into making each frame.
Keep it up, I hope to see more from you and further improvement of your drawing skills.
thanks, ill be having another video out in about a week or two
Something funky happens to the audio halfway through, I hope you fix this and re-submit
Decent video, good concept and though the animation looks super sketchy, that style really shines when it comes to wide shots and stills.
Keep it up, but please shorten your outro. It takes up half the video, and if this is an edit made for YouTube annotations, please consider cutting it down a bit here.
The animation was neat, don't get me wrong.
I'm starting to see this a lot more and more though where people submit these 2-4 second clips to the "Movie Portal" This would be a far more appropriate submission for the Art Portal if you export it as a gif, especially since you're not using any sound.
This is a animated "channel banner" not a movie.
please blam and re-upload.
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