BrandyBuizel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Trouble with 10-K Eggs!!! Pokemon GO! FULLY ANIMATED SHORT (parody)]

It's an alright parody, I feel like we're reaching the tail-end of them.
Can you please re-upload before it passes judgment cutting out the 30 second YouTube end bumper of useless annotations. They don't work here, so can we get a Newgrounds cut?

MonsterLaboratory responds:

Nah, I'm way too lazy to do that. I uploads what I uploads. Awesome if you like it, cool if you don't. Thanks for the feedback! :D

[N7 trailer]

80 seconds of a blinking woman on the left hand side, a monologue/call to action and a bunch of live action nasa(I assume) footage.
Not really a fan of this.

[TattooIN - Social Networking]

Cool animation, really love the static texture style on the moving solids. Though I wish I spoke... french? Sure, we'll go with that

[The Reward]

Beautiful story.
Excellent scene lighting.
All my 5.

[Zelda Triforce: Episode 1 Genesis]

I really like the looping comic cell style you're going for. Some of the panels look really good with it while keeping some stagnate is also a could choice to better highlight when action is happening.

The green backgrounds really take me out of it and makes the entire movie feel incomplete.

Chaosphoenix88 responds:

Thanks loving this feedback.

[Phony Phantom]

Very funny, well animated and lit and that jittery movement made the mask especially creepy.

[Animated Teaser 04: Head’s Up]

I admit the line-work look fantastic, but please stop uploading so many teasers so frequently with very little playback time. We cannot clutter the portal with these uploads.
please blam(though seriously please upload the final product when your done, looks great).

ibrabdo responds:

thx, there is no final product here, working on each scene is so much time consuming combination in 24 fps fbf 2d animation mix with 3d background that have painted texture, a process that will take not less than a year or two,i thought it will be nice to share the process with you guys and maybe to have some support, but since this is the second complain, it became obvious that it's the wrong place to post a long term project wips, and i will stop posting my work until someday if i managed to finish it ...

[The Water Elemental Battle]

Try looking into other media to get a sense of realistic motion. I get that this is all sprite work, but your characters should take a full second to fall at a constant rate. Gravity is much stronger and acts more exponentially than that.
This is just one example.

hanzo1 responds:

Thanks Brandy Buizel for the comment. This was my first ever battle animation and i know the flaws in it. Ill take what you said to heart, and I like creative criticism. but this started as a sprite animation test and i don't have too many sprites of the other chars other then the water elemental, the first character and the second character. well thanks for the comment again and i wish you a good day :D