BrandyBuizel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[LagMan]

It was very on the nose and even a little cringe at first. It's not too hard to pull off that kind of Tomska-y-ish humor but you probably made it cringy intentionally.
Anyway I stuck out to the end and got a giggle. Good job

AwkwardIisko responds:

Thanks man! :D I hope I didn't make it too cringy tho'. I don't want people to suffer because of my awkward humor :P

[Pop Nebula Dreamer Level 5]

You have some really amazing pixel/sprite work but there's not much substance to the story. It's not compelling and a bit blatant.

Stuff like(not exactly what you did but how it comes across):
"I"mmmmmmm singing about character development, because I am a character"
"I'm really upset right now so now I guess I just won't be and do something else?"
"I'm in trouble so I should transform, *transforms* woah! Who expected that!?"

I'm not trying to sound mean, I just need to make sure what I'm saying is exaggerated enough that you understand my point. I also point this out because the entire feel of the toon comes off as serious with humor sprinkled in(not a total comedy) so when these type of lines happen the viewer is supposed to take it seriously but can't.

PopNebulaDreamer responds:

I'm glad you like the animation. Episode 5 turned a bit dark because Vallow is shown as the main character. That's why I wanted to open with the Mana twins song to counteract the dark element Vallow brought to the show.

There's actually quite a bit of story I wasn't able to add because I ran out of time animating this one, but thank you for the review! : )

[Rickroll animation loop]

Not terrible, the tracking on the striped shirt is funky though

[Old Man of the Future!]

Very nice, it got better as time went on though I can't really say what it was about the first few gags that weren't as good as the ones toward the end. Maybe just repeating that type of humor got funnier over time. I dunno.

[Business As Usual]

After awhile I thought this was going to have a clever reveal that she was actually in a mental hospital and have somewhat of an introspective ending, but I was wrong and she's just bad at her job. A solid 3 either way