I'm super into these transitions!
Love it when stopmo hits the site <3

The thumbnail might be a turnoff for people, I don't have any solid recommendation, but it does not reflect the quality of the work you've made

I appreciate that although this is an animatic, it's very active like a studio animatic(tangentially i hate how the standard as risen in our industry), and the inclusion of the colored, fully animated shot shows you can back up the storyboarding with the ability to create the final look of the show.

The characters, voices, and dialogue all seem kind of generic tropes and there's nothing special there right now, but pilots often feel that way. When I write characters I usually write the pilot in my head to develop them and then write episode 1 as if it's episode 2. kind of warming up on how these relationships existed before the show; getting past the growing pains.

Where the dialogue writing is lacking, the shot composition and direction are exceptional!

It took Felix Baumgartner 4 minutes and 19 seconds to base jump from the stratosphere in the world's longest freefall ever recorded. Goth fell for nearly 4 hours. Someone do the math for me pls

one of the worst

I have to give you a 3.5 instead of 3 star rating because I accidentally improved my experience playing this game. My browser was zoomed in by about 150% so the character was much larger and the top of the screen was cropped off, unknown to me. i just saw my character in the grass and water to my left.

Very weirdly it made the aimless roaming more interesting when i couldn't see when the grass would end. It felt like ages before something would come into view that's important or different. I also didn't even know there was a top bit for awhile which made me wander in circles around the 3 edges of the river and hope to find another fish waiting to be caught. That extra aimless wandering before trying the game zoomed out was far more interesting than what I think other people experienced playing the game and it made the theme you're going for MUCH stronger

Did this need to be a games submission? I hope I'm missing something cause all i see is like a pdf-style guide to doing something off-site to watch the content. Making newgrounds centric stuff work on newgrounds is a no brainer, but when a game is too big for web or the content can't be experienced on the platform I think it's totally fine to just have it work on its intended platform and only link to it in the description or reference it in a blog post with download instructions.

Feels kind of weird to attribute a rating to this so I hope someone can tell me I'm wrong: that the content is actually somewhere in this submission

pretty ****ing funny

had to listen while looking at the art of course, gotta say i think the light/hopeful tones make this track. it'd be bland without contrast and this sounds great!

i wish i could be more verbose about why i like music sometimes, but music is the one area of art i can't create myself. I just know the vibes I feel and this makes me want to dance

Stylin'

The shapes are TO DIE FOR
Very gestalt depiction

No shame, this is tight