I appreciate that although this is an animatic, it's very active like a studio animatic(tangentially i hate how the standard as risen in our industry), and the inclusion of the colored, fully animated shot shows you can back up the storyboarding with the ability to create the final look of the show.
The characters, voices, and dialogue all seem kind of generic tropes and there's nothing special there right now, but pilots often feel that way. When I write characters I usually write the pilot in my head to develop them and then write episode 1 as if it's episode 2. kind of warming up on how these relationships existed before the show; getting past the growing pains.
Where the dialogue writing is lacking, the shot composition and direction are exceptional!