BrandyBuizel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[BeastHeart Prologue Episode: The awakening]

You obviously have a clear direction you want this series to take by the writing style and video effects, but I gotta say for this "prologue" you didn't do a good job setting the stage for anything. I have absolutely no idea what this is supposed to be about.

Also there's some conflicting dialogue that makes it more confusing:
"A demon entered the village"
...later...
"Did you say it was machines in the village?"
"Yeas, why?"
That doesn't make sense.

And also:
"Take the pups to an orphanage"
...
"Just do as I said"
...
"Just take the pups to the school"
There wasn't really a visible shift where the (what I assume is a protagonist) changed it's mind between these lines so I assume it might be a discontinuity?

So yea, in summary, looks like a lot of care was put into making an upcoming series, but from this prologue/teaser alone I have no idea what it's about(after watching several times to be sure).

[Vending Machine]

It's a pretty unique idea, I really enjoyed it and some obvious effort was put into making each frame.
Keep it up, I hope to see more from you and further improvement of your drawing skills.

CosmicArt responds:

thanks, ill be having another video out in about a week or two

[Game Grumps Animated: Meeting Saria]

Something funky happens to the audio halfway through, I hope you fix this and re-submit

[Pokemon Go is for PUSSIES!!!]

Decent video, good concept and though the animation looks super sketchy, that style really shines when it comes to wide shots and stills.
Keep it up, but please shorten your outro. It takes up half the video, and if this is an edit made for YouTube annotations, please consider cutting it down a bit here.

[New First Animate Banner1]

The animation was neat, don't get me wrong.
I'm starting to see this a lot more and more though where people submit these 2-4 second clips to the "Movie Portal" This would be a far more appropriate submission for the Art Portal if you export it as a gif, especially since you're not using any sound.
This is a animated "channel banner" not a movie.
please blam and re-upload.

[Mbr vs DeeJay]

Decent sprite work, though it is extremely annoyingly loud, both the music and sfx.
I'm sure future viewers would a appreciate you leveling the audio and submitting a re-upload.

[Glory Sunday's]

Okay, so I have no idea what's going on. I feel like you're watching a video or listening to a podcast no one else can hear and talking back to it. I assume there's two people talking? Maybe? It's very difficult to tell if there's two, let alone which one is talking. There's not really a lot of motion or anything going on either, just a lot of not English on screen.

But one thing that gets me "I saw this video and I just had to show you". Only because the drawing style changed made me question whether or not you made the clip that comes after it or you actually took it from somewhere.
That last bit is just a concern and was not reflected in your review score.

Glory-v responds:

Thanks for the tips, I'm still working out on how to do things I mean this is only my second video so I'm still learning. But ya thanks I totally agree with you I thought it would be better than this but oh well you learn from your mistakes. Oh and I did make the clip, I made all of it.Thanks for the feed back. :)