"also my first animation that i spent more than 3 minutes on"
There never should be animation you spend less on. It does however look like 5 minutes of effort, so that's a good step. Also I see no reason for this to be rated A. It's a 12 second animation with the last two frames a dick.
ya well fooled u! it was actually like 30 minutes! and idk how the rating system with newgrounds works yet, so i dont wanna rate anything too low. should it be M?
Sprite animations featuring Mario and Sonic aren't something new on the site. This includes even the way you displayed them here in a dragon ball or anime-esque presentation.
A little tip as well, NEVER EVER FLIPPIN EVER use the nintendo logo or sega logo(or any trademarks for that matter, that's the R thing in the circle) You are 10x more likely to get DMCA'd(though that is uncommon here to my knowledge) simply because a company can actually lose their trademark if they don't control who is allowed to use it, where they display it and what form it is displayed in. That being said they also aren't actually affiliated with you in making your sprite series so it's pointless credits.
However, none of this is why I gave you a low score.
There isn't too much to the animation. there are a ton of sprite sheet loops and even more still of the characters doing nothing(though I do understand that is very anime) but just makes the video lacking. As an intro it is very long(again I know, anime) which can suck if you see it before EVERY episode you will make and frankly the fact it's a swf means you also CAN'T skip it. Like at all. I'm sure someone out there could do some html voodoo shit but it would probably take most people longer than the intro itself lasts.
Also because you used the Dragon Ball Super opening I'm sure you are aware "The World's Strongest" is also a movie title in the series and I believe you also could probably come up with something better and more fitting that describes this series(I honestly have no idea what it's about yet. Looks like SMBZ to me).
Lastly another point that reduced your score for me was that it's an opening. That's great you put a lot of work into it and all, but if we'll be seeing this opening inside of future animations by you, I don't see a reason that it needs it's own place on the site.
I'm not going to blam your submission because I feel you are probably proud of your work(which is what Newgrounds is all about) so I'll simply give you a lower-middle score to represent what I've summed up here, hope you take some advice from mine and other people's reviews(because " FEEDBACK IS MUCH APPRECIATIVE!") and leave the blamming and saving to everyone else on the Under Judgment portal tab.
-b
Hey there.
Sorry for the VERY late reply (I'm guessing this was 2 years since you've posted this review?), but I can see what you're saying. There shouldn't be any reason for me to include the two logos in question and I'm being extra careful not to go over the boundaries and accidentally get DMCA'd, (which, like you said before, is very uncommon on a website like Newgrounds.)
I had since took your advice and won't post an opening animation of any sort here. For now on, it'll only be in every episode of TWS that I post here instead, so there might be a chance that I'll be deleting this soon. I also understand that uploading a swf version of something like this would be annoying, especially since it'll loop continuously, so I'll make sure to include a preloader the next time I post an animation, or just upload it in a video format like a .mp4 file.
Speaking of opening, I'm currently revising this opening. It won't have Dragon Ball Super's opening music. It'll have an entirely new opening music, one that's at least passable than the one used originally. However, I won't promise changing the name of the series though, since it fits well to me.
I appreciate you not blamming me for an animation that's mediocre at best and very much appreciate the feedback you've provided me awhile back. Hopefully I'll improve my skills as time progresses.
Thank you for the constructive criticism and have a nice day.
-ChaosDemonv1
I really enjoy these comics of Shen's and to see it animated(and NOT poorly) is pretty great.
I get what you were going for with "not much going on" because... well, it's depression. But then again the little that does happen isn't well animated or drawn and the same still we're treated to in the entire duration is pretty poorly made. Overall it just feels like you chose this topic because you wouldn't have to do much or put a lot of effort into it.
Yeah, I did choose this particular subject because it wasn't that complicated to produce, but that doesn't mean this was the most I could put into it. It was the most I wanted to put into it. You should know that this just doesn't just exist because it was easy to make. That is maybe 25% of the reason. The main reason was that there's not much going on, in general. Plus, this is my first "real" animation ever, so I chose an appropriate subject.
I don't see why this is in the movie category. This could easily be a looping gif lasting less than a second. Please blam and re-upload to the Art Portal.
I love this. The colors work so well and the 3D in 2D aesthetic is great!
It's a pretty neat song and message, the only thing I'd want more from this is more fluid animation. Movements just felt too smooth and slow in contrast to the beats of the song.
Not a bad parody at all. The animation was lacking(not much going on besides primary motions) and the voices were pretty decent at the beginning, though they drifted off and Morty began to sound different as did Rick.
Sometimes the performance of the lines didn't flow naturally. Overall, decent parody and fairly original(as far as parodies can be)
A beautiful poem(I teared up a little), well read and wonderfully brought to life.
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Mario and Sonic: The Worlds Strongest Opening #1 
Shen and the Internet 
Adventures of Depression 
Good Advice 
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Rick And Morty: Soylent LeafGreen 
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