BrandyBuizel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Trouble with 10-K Eggs!!! Pokemon GO! FULLY ANIMATED SHORT (parody)]

It's an alright parody, I feel like we're reaching the tail-end of them.
Can you please re-upload before it passes judgment cutting out the 30 second YouTube end bumper of useless annotations. They don't work here, so can we get a Newgrounds cut?

MonsterLaboratory responds:

Nah, I'm way too lazy to do that. I uploads what I uploads. Awesome if you like it, cool if you don't. Thanks for the feedback! :D

[Zelda Triforce: Episode 1 Genesis]

I really like the looping comic cell style you're going for. Some of the panels look really good with it while keeping some stagnate is also a could choice to better highlight when action is happening.

The green backgrounds really take me out of it and makes the entire movie feel incomplete.

Ogilvietheblue responds:

Thanks loving this feedback.

[Animated Teaser 04: Head’s Up]

I admit the line-work look fantastic, but please stop uploading so many teasers so frequently with very little playback time. We cannot clutter the portal with these uploads.
please blam(though seriously please upload the final product when your done, looks great).

ibrabdo responds:

thx, there is no final product here, working on each scene is so much time consuming combination in 24 fps fbf 2d animation mix with 3d background that have painted texture, a process that will take not less than a year or two,i thought it will be nice to share the process with you guys and maybe to have some support, but since this is the second complain, it became obvious that it's the wrong place to post a long term project wips, and i will stop posting my work until someday if i managed to finish it ...

[The Water Elemental Battle]

Try looking into other media to get a sense of realistic motion. I get that this is all sprite work, but your characters should take a full second to fall at a constant rate. Gravity is much stronger and acts more exponentially than that.
This is just one example.

hanzo1 responds:

Thanks Brandy Buizel for the comment. This was my first ever battle animation and i know the flaws in it. Ill take what you said to heart, and I like creative criticism. but this started as a sprite animation test and i don't have too many sprites of the other chars other then the water elemental, the first character and the second character. well thanks for the comment again and i wish you a good day :D

[Bloodracuted]

I'm not even sure why you bothered roto-scoping. The lines are constantly inaccurate and don't add much. But even then I guess you'd just be left with hard-to-hear audio and blown out, tinted, live-action film.
Not that good.

LukeOllyOxen responds:

Hm alright wise guy. @ the time I recorded this with my cannon 550d that's why audio mightn't b the best. Thanks 4 your opinion

[Glimpse of Me]

It's a really neat style. I love that everything is made up of lines, no fill, and the animation still manages to flow well.
Sometimes the title cards felt a little on the nose about what was going on or but even then there were a just a bit too frequent for my taste.

TraineeArtist responds:

I'm glad you like the style, and I'll try to work on pacing and story for future animations. Thanks!

[How to make a Baby stop crying.]

The story isn't great which stinks because that's the main focus here.
The visuals are... there. It's just the same stick figures with moving mouths.
It's definitely not blam worthy, but it isn't very good.

tonyfamous responds:

This is a style I am persuing for random animations that I want to pump out quickly. I don't know if you've personally tried to animate anything, but animating is actually a long and drawn out process that can take weeks, months or years and since I only do this for fun in my free time, sometimes I prefer to sacrifice quality for quantity.

[BIRTHDAY FOR LEGEND]

This isn't very good at all, but I am concerned whether or not this was stolen because of the watermarking.

JacksonS7R responds:

Hello BrandyBuizel

The watermarking is because I had used the Swf to Mp4 converter Trail Version of that link...

Thanks for your comment.