BrandyBuizel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Sticker-Mation]

Brilliant and creative use of stickers and actual locations. The background is interesting while not distracting from the subject. Awesome job!

theo1231231 responds:

Thanks loads for that confirmation, I cant really tell anymore what it looks like, so its good to hear someones opinion with a fresh look on it :PP

[RubberOnionBattle Sept 2016]

Some were better than others, but that I guess is the nature of a collab

rubberonion responds:

This is true.

[The Toadstool: Drunken Mario]

I never laughed as hard as I did when I watched this. In fact I didn't laugh at all.
Everything is kind of just there, the jokes aren't jokes ad there's no punch to it. It just feels like a bunch of non-sequiturs were mashed together.

Taliwacky responds:

Thanks for the feedback. I really thought you laughed at first lol. I will definitely try to improve in the future. I feel my animation has improved, just need to work on the jokes.

[A Brief Summary of DBZ]

This video could've worked a lot better if the speaker had a lot more energy for this. Take for example Lyle McDouchebag's work:

He makes it clear the character he plays doesn't want to be there by making side remarks, but he's always loud and clear in what he's saying. Even though he doesn't want to be there talking about some dumb shit he doesn't care about, he takes the time to enunciate his words as if pretending to care so when he makes those loud side comments it comes off sharper.

ClassicRandy responds:

Thanks for the helpful feedback! I can totally see what you're talking about. I'll definitely try to improve on that in the future.

[LagMan]

It was very on the nose and even a little cringe at first. It's not too hard to pull off that kind of Tomska-y-ish humor but you probably made it cringy intentionally.
Anyway I stuck out to the end and got a giggle. Good job

AwkwardIisko responds:

Thanks man! :D I hope I didn't make it too cringy tho'. I don't want people to suffer because of my awkward humor :P

[Pop Nebula Dreamer Level 5]

You have some really amazing pixel/sprite work but there's not much substance to the story. It's not compelling and a bit blatant.

Stuff like(not exactly what you did but how it comes across):
"I"mmmmmmm singing about character development, because I am a character"
"I'm really upset right now so now I guess I just won't be and do something else?"
"I'm in trouble so I should transform, *transforms* woah! Who expected that!?"

I'm not trying to sound mean, I just need to make sure what I'm saying is exaggerated enough that you understand my point. I also point this out because the entire feel of the toon comes off as serious with humor sprinkled in(not a total comedy) so when these type of lines happen the viewer is supposed to take it seriously but can't.

PopNebulaDreamer responds:

I'm glad you like the animation. Episode 5 turned a bit dark because Vallow is shown as the main character. That's why I wanted to open with the Mana twins song to counteract the dark element Vallow brought to the show.

There's actually quite a bit of story I wasn't able to add because I ran out of time animating this one, but thank you for the review! : )

[The Trouble with 10-K Eggs!!! Pokemon GO! FULLY ANIMATED SHORT (parody)]

It's an alright parody, I feel like we're reaching the tail-end of them.
Can you please re-upload before it passes judgment cutting out the 30 second YouTube end bumper of useless annotations. They don't work here, so can we get a Newgrounds cut?

MonsterLaboratory responds:

Nah, I'm way too lazy to do that. I uploads what I uploads. Awesome if you like it, cool if you don't. Thanks for the feedback! :D

[Zelda Triforce: Episode 1 Genesis]

I really like the looping comic cell style you're going for. Some of the panels look really good with it while keeping some stagnate is also a could choice to better highlight when action is happening.

The green backgrounds really take me out of it and makes the entire movie feel incomplete.

Chaosphoenix88 responds:

Thanks loving this feedback.