BrandyBuizel's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Jimmy]

He's adorable, really great stop motion, must've taken ages!
I'd rate it higher if there was more plot to it; for what it is, it's fantastic :)

[Bedroom]

Not much going on to review, but if you wanted to make this piece better I'd suggest making the light coming from the door more dynamic. The light fills part of the room in the direction of the man on the computer so it should light his back up similar to the computer screen. And when the blood starts spilling the light is covered up once again until it goes away.

Little details like that tend to sell "believe-ability" which sounds dumb for a cartoon, but really means engaging the viewer.

fattyfatfatto responds:

Thanks for the feedback, this is something I completely missed and I am glad you pointed out. In future work I will keep this in mind. Thank you!

[3D Still Life]

It looks good, it's not a movie.
I get you want to show off the 360 view, but this can be done with several high resolution images stitched together using different angles and a comparison shot of the original. You could upload THAT image to the Art Portal under "3D work"

[TOO FAST?]

Not a bad cartoon, not anything new or particularly interesting. My main issue with the animation is that you keep trying to build up on a joke you haven't made.
You never once delivered a reason why Sonic going too fast is actually a problem, you just expect us to agree because it's from a meme, but the meme has nothing to do with this scenario.

[Regular Show Fan Animation]

I love these weird, experimental, almost melty, animations. I highly encourage you to revisit this type of work in the future as you get better and better as an artist and animator!

[Pizzaman]

1. I don't know how the main character got into this situation, I barely comprehend him taking the pizza boxes to the front porch let alone actually going inside.
2. Kawaii Bob needs to chill, don't blame the messenger, your shitty friends ate it.
3. Nice Game Grumps cameo ;)

That being said this was funny and really well animated. I find it hard to sometimes watch these scenarios like I said above but it was able to suspend my belief enough for me to enjoy the effort that went into this, The movement between and during each sequence was fun and elastic. Great opening background too, wallpaper worthy!

Shaipi responds:

Thanks for your critic ! I absolutely want to exercise my directing skills more haha.

[Skaven Speech]

Great cloth and character animation. Honestly it was so much more than I could have expected. I just wish there was more to watch and more context to the story.
I only rate this as a 3.5 because I can't justify giving it the same score I would give an equally well done animation that is also a fully finished work.
Keep up the excellent work!

[Apt 101. ( i am happy at...)]

Really good roto-scoping, I enjoyed watching the video though admittedly at some parts I didn't understand exactly why the character was breaking down in that moment.
Overall the animation has great aesthetic and it made my eyes smile.