Cute little story. The animation itself is pretty alright, thought there's a lot of clipping when it comes to cloth models and a lot of wood textures are scaled/squashed kind of funky which took me out of it for a little bit.
Also in your final render it looks like there's a very limited color range(which is common when using scanline renderers) because there are large splotches of single colors on the character model's highlights and it clearly isn't stylistically cell shaded because everything else on screen has smooth shadows.
Nonetheless I enjoyed it! :)
(Just wanted to point out areas for improvement)