Really nice line work for an animation, but the entire thing is lacking in environments and color.
It looks super incomplete so I hope you plan on finishing this.
Really nice line work for an animation, but the entire thing is lacking in environments and color.
It looks super incomplete so I hope you plan on finishing this.
The main aspect of animation as it is defined is to create the illusion of movement through successive pictures. The movement is pretty smooth with regards to that department. That being said, I don't think its fair to judge an animation negatively based on the fact that it doesn't have color or an environment. However, I agree this does make it look less refined.
Deep.
You really got the plot across and consequences through really well, you didn't have to straight up say anything(plus there was no talking). Great job!
It is exactly what I'm after, thank you for your review!
I never hit great work dood harder!
Exceptionally funny and original, and Orion's belt...oh boy, you got me.
This movie is a great example of someone who know's their limits, but makes an earnest try to improve and does so in many ways over time.
My biggest gripe with this is that it doesn't add anything to the original audio. After watching 2 minutes of two characters only moving their mouths, facing each other with a couple camera changes, I decided to look at the source material. The video is of PewDiePie sitting across a table from Ken, doing the EXACT same thing.
You might say, "well he drew a naked Ken for the selfie part and threw a pie in his face at the end, that was goofy", but they did that in the video too. They even showed the actual picture of Ken naked.
The reason these "YouTubers Animateds" are fun and interesting is from what the creators imagination can ADD to the audio, while this is just a shot-for-shot recreation of the first two minutes of the original video.
2 stars, it deserves to be in the portal, but leaves way too much to be desired.
Note taken, thank you!
It's very choppy for a stick animation, but my bigger issue is that your recorded your screen instead of exporting your movie. It takes away from the only thing happening, what's on screen.
You can upload swf files to NG and NG also has a download for a "swf to mp4" converter called swivel on the site.
Hope that helps.
I tried that but it didn't work
Great work Brewster, a pretty good followup to "Crust" in terms of writing and motion :)
Daaaaannnnnnnngg.
Excellent compostiion and storytelling, I couldn't look away.
Thank you very much ;)
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