There's a lot of great, fluid motion in this GG animated, it was a pleasant surprise from the common static poses :)
There's a lot of great, fluid motion in this GG animated, it was a pleasant surprise from the common static poses :)
The first part kind of sucked and felt very off character for Soldier and very generic, but I'm glad I stuck around because the Genji bit was legitimately funny.
Thank's for the feedback! The thing is that's what I'm going for in this series, the opposite of the characters.
Looks sick, I think you really nailed the style you were going for!
Cute stop-motion and the characters look pretty good. You clearly care, there's solid motion for every action and even the hair on characters is detailed in.
Nice work :)
I'm giving you a one star because I don't believe this really deserves to be kept on the movie portal for all eternity because it lacks the quality and substance.
But I've got some advice:
This isn't really a character test. A character test would mean you drawing common motions and seeing how these characters may perform them to match their personalities on the screen instead of just in your head.
e.g. One of them is clearly timid so he may take quick small steps or a shaky walk for a basic walk cycle.
Also, although there isn't any color, to due a proper test you should aim for the full motion the character will perform in the final piece. This isn't an animatic, it's a test, you can't really see how they will look in the final if they move every 6th frame(unless that is the look you will be going for).
A great resource to take as an example is Ben Bocquelet's "Gumball 1min animation test" on his personal youtube channel. It doesn't much resemble the final show, but you can see in 1 minute how each character differs in look and personality by how they move and in what time intervals they move(e.g. gumball is irrational, so his movements are snappy and dramatic, while darwin is sensible and moves very steadily).
Hope that helps and good luck!
Thanks for star and advica about "animation test"meaning, You have totally right but...
I work in movie/animation industry (as animator - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4DUkS98yw5Y , as screenwriter - http://www.agibagi.com/ , as storyboarder - http://thewitcher.com/en/witcher3 ), and now looking for something specefic, way from modern-cartoons industry, so as cell animation. Back to the roots. I hop my next "test" will be better. Thanks for Your help and time :)
There's a lot of smooth, nice animation, but then there's a bunch of snappy movement like the flashlight clipping onto his belt, the zipper bag opening, and the cobwebs that really took me out of it.
Otherwise good work!
yeah alot of technical errors.... but i really needed to complete a project rather then getting wrapped up in the details..... ill work my way up to having that luxury ... i appreciate your feedback .... its good to know that took u out of it... :) i hope you will continue to follow and criticize me in the future... it helps alot!
The "You've got a friend" song was probably my favorite. Really catchy, wish the creator would upload it as a standalone.
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